What is meant by family. My family is my support system, my mother, aunts, and cousins all
provide me with some type of support or guidance. To me famly means
love, friendship, and support.
Love is something that everyone knows about whether is receiving love or
giving love. It is a feeling that no human being can live without, my
family feels love is a big issue. In my life time there were situations
that arouse that I would not have made it through witout my family.
When I was in great sorrow, my aunt took off work so that she could be
with me during my time of grief.
Our family system is very unique because everyone takes care of everyone
in some way. Obviously my parents take care of the entire family, but
in my family the oldest takes care of everyone younger and the next
takes care of those who are under them and so on. Our system works well
because sometimes my parents can’t be there or help out so we look to
our other family members for advice or help. It just brings our family
closer and closer.
My family members are very caring and watchful. If there is an opposing
force it will be noticed and seen. We as a family then communicate it to
each other or to that one person directly. We then leave it up to that
family member to deal with it on their own unless asked or if it is a
real serious situation. Opposing forces have no place in our family
because we keep it so tight.
I love everything that I have especially my family. They mean so much to
me. They are my strength, my life and my everything. If I had to
choose, I will always choose them as my family. I’m so grateful that I
have them in my life.That's why I love my family so much.
Dear Shakirah, I want to comment your essay: Family...
ReplyDelete- First of all, I would say it is an interesting essay. Your storytelling is so clear.You can use words that are rarely used.
- Next,you need to elaborate your essay and make it longer. Put some detail in your essay and make it more interesting.
- Lastly,there some spelling mistake. on paragraph 1 line 2 'To me famly means love, friendship, and support' should be '
To me FAMILY means love, friendship, and support'
- on paragraph 1 line 1 'What is meant by family.' should be What is meant by family?'