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Friday, 10 August 2012

My best friend

       Everyone has  friends.I also has many friends.It is a friend in need is a friend indeed. An ideal friend possesses all the qualities of head and heart. It is easy to befriend many but difficult to choose good friends. God gives us relatives by virtue of being born in a family, but friends we can choose.
     Shamimi is my best friend. She is from U P , a young lady of 18 with a thin body. But she has scholarly looks. She has a personality and manners that never fail to make an impression on others. Her presence in a company always makes it lively. Straightforward and outspoken , she never feels shy in the company of his seniors. She respects her elders and is affectionate and kind to the youngsters.
     Despite her religious bent of mind and high thinking Shamimi always keeps himself trim by wearing decent clothes.Her dress shows how much care she takes in creating a total effect of her personality. There is nothing in her appearance which may give even the slightest feeling of his indifference and carelessness. She has a disciplined way of leading his life.
     I am proud of my friend. She is intelligent in studies. All the students of her class look forward to her for guidance.She also is in the good books of the teachers. She has taken up N.C.C in the school. She was declared as the best cadet in the zone.
     She speaks English fluently. She is also very good at writing. She has a good at writing .She has a good style of her own.Besides, she is a good thinker. Even the teachers sometimes call for her opinion in school matters. She always calls a spade a spade. All the things have endeared him to all of us.

1 comment:

  1. Dear Shakirah, I want to comment your essay: My best friend...

    - First of all, your storytelling is confusing. Shamimi is a young lady but you use male pronouns. For example, on paragraph 3 line 4 'She has a disciplined way of leading HIS life'
    - Next, on paragraph 1 line 1 you can replace has many friends to have many friends.
    -Lastly, you need to elaborate your essay and make it longer. Be careful with pronouns and great job.

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